四六級(jí)考試越來(lái)越使模板無(wú)用武之地，閱卷老師在閱卷的過(guò)程中多的是關(guān)
注同學(xué)們的用詞和句型的使用。

高分作文標(biāo)志

1 ：四級(jí)120-150 字；六級(jí)150-180 字；

2 是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；

3 用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4 關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用we
/ I （比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be
paid to.）舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的后一段：It is ，therefore ，
high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放
在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般
放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說(shuō)： Other individuals， however， take the attitude that …

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)
good， bad， many ， thing， think， people ， opinion等等）比如上面例
子中，applicable代替proper， approaches 代替ways， implement代替carry
out ， sharpen one''s competitive edge代替enhance one''s competitiveness
（提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力）

下面舉一篇我南京六級(jí)班上一位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他
是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換
和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought
me a computer as birthday present ， which exerted a tremendous fascination
on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information
i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night
I was sleepless ， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in
sth.

google替換 search

an army of替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of
computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，
computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing
to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged
by them ， in large measure ！

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某
個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with …非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)＂與…一致＂的意思，替換 With
…

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into （ flood into / swarm into）替換 enter into

Current （ currently）替換 now

Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的For a start
，we can ， freely ， search desired information at any moment . Little
by little ， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will
be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online
by chatting ， playing games， or delivering email.

For a start 替換 To begin with

We can， freely ， search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched ， and our horizons will be greatly
broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)