3.語(yǔ)句連貫 4.條理清楚 注：通讀全文,檢查是否有錯(cuò).改正拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤.寫(xiě)作文是一個(gè)復(fù)雜的思維過(guò)程.一篇作文需反復(fù)修改
寫(xiě)文章離不開(kāi)句子。但英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式往往與中文有很大的區(qū)別，這就要我們老師在平時(shí)多訓(xùn)練學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維，否則學(xué)生寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章就是chineseenglish(中文式英語(yǔ))。多用簡(jiǎn)單句：注意：英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本類型：一、主語(yǔ)+不及動(dòng)詞-My head aches. 我頭疼。-Everybody laughed. 大家都笑了。It rained.天下雨了。 二、主語(yǔ)+連系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)-English is very easy. 英語(yǔ)很容易。He looks tired. 他看上去是累了.注：連系動(dòng)詞常由(be/look/smell/feel/become/turn)充當(dāng)。表語(yǔ)常用名詞/形容詞/數(shù)詞/代詞充當(dāng)
三、主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+直接賓語(yǔ)-She likes the flowers. 她喜歡這些花。Dad bought a car. 父親買了輛汽車。 四、主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語(yǔ)(人)+直接賓語(yǔ)(物)-He told her the news.他把這消息告訴了她He gave me an
ap-ple.他給了我一只蘋(píng)果。注：如把物放前，可在物后加to或for：..give/pass sb sth=..give/pass sth to sb ..buy sb sth=buy sth for sb
五、主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)-He told me to stay home.他叫我呆在家里。The smell made him sick. 這氣味使他惡心。He made us laugh.他讓我們笑了。
說(shuō)明：上述各例都簡(jiǎn)化到了低限度，在此基礎(chǔ)上，我們可以加上一些修飾成分使句子變得更復(fù)雜，表達(dá)更豐富的內(nèi)容。英語(yǔ)句子看上去紛繁龐雜,但仔細(xì)觀察不外乎五個(gè)基本句式。這五個(gè)基本句式可以演變出多種復(fù)雜的英語(yǔ)句子。 換言之,絕大多數(shù)英語(yǔ)句子都是由這簡(jiǎn)單句添加或簡(jiǎn)化而得來(lái)的。如：In fact, English is very easy to teach. 事實(shí)上，英語(yǔ)很容易教。She likes the flowers very much. 她非常喜歡這些花。He told her the news
8.設(shè)想一下你二十年后的生活，請(qǐng)以“My Life in Twenty Years”為題，根據(jù)以下的提示寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
(1).介紹未來(lái)的生活(學(xué)習(xí)，工作，生活的城市，旅行，愛(ài)好等方面) (2).為了未來(lái)的生活我應(yīng)該怎樣做(注意一般將來(lái)時(shí)的使用)。
In twenty years,I think I’ll be a reporter.I’ll live in Shanghai because there will be more jobs in that city.As a reporter,I will meet lots of interesting people,so I’ll have more friends.I’ll live with my friends so that we can go shopping together on weekends.I’ll probably keep a lovely cat because I like it very much.In the future,I think I’ll take a holiday in Hongkong when possible.One day,I’ll even travel around the world. This is my life in twenty years.In ordwe to make my future life better,I think I have to study hard from now on.
9.同學(xué)們，你會(huì)做什么好吃的食物呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以“How to make fruit salad”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容：1.制作水果色拉的材料和分量 2.制作的步驟。
How to make fruit salad
Let’s make fruit salad.We need some fruit-two apples,three bananas,one watermelon.Also,we need a cup of yogurt and two spoons of honey.First,wash the apples,bananas and watermelon and peel them. Then,cut them up.Next,put all the fruit into a bowl.Then,add a cup of yogurt,two spoons of honey and mix them up.Finally,it’s time to enjoy the fruit salad!
10.假如你是李明，你的朋友Anna邀請(qǐng)你星期六和她一起去海邊玩。而你沒(méi)有空，因?yàn)槟慵纫疹櫮闵〉拿妹茫忠獮橄轮芤坏挠⒄Z(yǔ)考試做準(zhǔn)備，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封拒絕她的邀請(qǐng)，并邀請(qǐng)她下周六跟你一起去看乒乓球比賽。 Dear Anna,
Thanks a lot for asking me to go to the beach with you this Saturday.I’d love to,but I’m afraid I can’t.I have to look after my little sister.She is ill.Also,I am going to have an English test next Monday,so I have to study for it at home this weekend.Maybe let’s do it another time.And there is a ping-pong match next Saturday.Can you come to watch the match with me?I hope you can make it. Yours, Li Ming 11.同學(xué)們，你的好朋友Karen 也遇到一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，陳述她的問(wèn)題，并給她提一些建議。(1).Karen 的英語(yǔ)成績(jī)不好，覺(jué)得英語(yǔ)難 建議：多讀英語(yǔ)，認(rèn)真聽(tīng)課，做筆記;(2).Karen 有點(diǎn)胖 建議：多吃蔬菜水果，多做運(yùn)動(dòng)
My friend Karen has some problems.First,she is not good at English.She thinks English is difficult.She often fails in the exams.I think she should read English more.She should listen to her teacher carefully and take notes in class.She should also ask her teacher for help.If she works hard,she will get good grades.Second,she is heavy.I think she should eat more vegetables and fruit.She should exercise more.If she does,she will be thinner soon.I hope that the advice can help her.
12.請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇制作玉米花(popcorn)的小短文。注意使用first, next, then, finally等表示過(guò)程的詞。不少于50個(gè)詞。
I like popcorn very much. I learned from my mother how to make popcorn. Now let me show you the ways. First,you put the popcorn into the popper. Next, turn on the popper. Wait for several minutes. Then you pour the popcorn into the bowl. And put salt on the popcorn. Finally ,you can eat the popcorn. 13.假如你是Mark，你們學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)正在對(duì)大家的生活方式做調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你以my lifestyle為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你自己的生活方式。作文內(nèi)容：1.談?wù)勀愕娘嬍沉?xí)慣 2.談?wù)勀愕倪\(yùn)動(dòng)方式 3.說(shuō)說(shuō)你的作息規(guī)律 I am Mark.I have lots of good habits.I eat breakfast and drink milk every morning before going to school.I have lots of fruit and vegetables every day.I hardly ever eat junk food because I know it’s bad for my health.I always have my meals on time.We all know the body needs exercise,so I exercise every day,I often play basketball with my classmates after school.I never stay up late.I usually go to bed at 10:00 and sleep for eight hours every day. As you can see,I have a healthy lifestyle.
14.同學(xué)們，你了解你周圍的公園，飯店，電*，購(gòu)物中心等場(chǎng)所嗎?請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文對(duì)它們進(jìn)行描述。作文內(nèi)容：(1).只寫(xiě)其中一樣(如電*),列舉出不少于3個(gè) (2).比較哪個(gè)是好的和差的并說(shuō)明原因。
There are some movie theaters in my city.Dali Cinema is the best.It has the most comfortable seats and the newest movies.It is the closest to the Center of the city.It has the best service,so it is the most popular.However,it is the most expensive.Movie world is the best.It has the smallest screen and the worst sound.It is not as clean as Dali Cinema.Screen City is better than Movie World.It has the biggest Screen.It is cheaper than Dali Cinema.I like to go to Screen City best.
15.你長(zhǎng)大后打算什么呢?你如何去實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想呢?請(qǐng)以My Dream Job為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。作文內(nèi)容：1.你長(zhǎng)大后打算做什么?為什么?2.為了你的目標(biāo)你打算怎么做?
My Dream Job
I am a student and study in No.1 Middle School now. I am going to be a scientist when I grow up. I love science very much,especially nature science.I like to study plants and animals.In fact,my mother is a science teacher.She often teaches me to learn science.I am going to learn science in Beijing University after high school.Now I am working hard to learn math and science well. I hope that I will be an excellent scientist in the future.
16.你覺(jué)得你的校園生活安全嗎?請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇題為How to keep Safe in school 的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶�。作文�?nèi)容：1.描述一件發(fā)生在你身上或你看到的發(fā)生在校園的意外事件(經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果)2.提出解決這種校園意外事件的建議(至少兩條) 3.呼吁每個(gè)學(xué)生要注意(pay attention to)校園安全。
How to keep Safe in school
If we are not careful enough,our school life can be dangerous.For example,one day,two students from my class ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly,one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor.Therefore,he had to stay to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers should keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.At last,I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school. 17.新年計(jì)劃 要求：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一段60詞左右的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Do you have any plan for your next year? Can you say something about your New Year’s resolutions? How many resolutions do you have? Why are you going to do them? How are you going to do them?
I have three resolutions for my next year. First, I am going to spend more time studying English, because I want to improve it to get good grades. I will practice to read English every morning and do some English writing every evening. Next, I am going to take more exercise. I want to keep fit by doing it. I will take a walk with my mother after supper. Finally, I am going to make more friends. So I can be happier and learn more strong points from them. I will take part in some activities to meet more people and make friends with some of them.
18.我的夢(mèng)想-- When I grow up , I’m going to do what I want to do. I’m going to move somewhere interesting. Pairs sounds like a city that I could enjoy. They have lots of fashion shows there. I want to be a reporter for a fashion magazine. So how am I going to do it? First, I’m going to find a part-time job for a year or two and save some money. Then I’m going to be a students at art school in Paris. And I’m going to study French at the same time. Next, I’m going to hold art exhibitions because I want to buy a big house with the money and I’m going to travel all over the world . Finally, I’m going to retire somewhere quiet and beautiful. 19. 介紹你和你的同學(xué)之間的不同。
I’m Li Yang. My best friend is Mei Ting. I’m different from her. She is more outgoing. She likes sports very much. I’m very quiet. I like painting. She is much taller than me. I am heavier than her. She is more athletic than me, but I’m smarter than her. Though we are differernt in some ways, we both like collecting stamps. 20.雞蛋蘑菇湯是家庭很簡(jiǎn)單平常又有營(yíng)養(yǎng)的吃法，請(qǐng)你用給出的原料簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下蘑菇湯的做法。(80詞左右) Ingredients: mushroom, egg, peanut oil, relish, salt
First, wash the mushrooms and cut them into pieces.Next,break the egg and put in a bowl to mix it with a little salt.Then, pour two tea spoons of peanut oil into the pan and fried the mushroom,Next, pour a bowl of water into the pan and cook until it become boiling. Finally, put some relish and salt into the soup. And now you can have a taste
21. New Year's Resolution
I have two best friends. They're Julie and Ken. One day, we talk about our new year's resolutions. I'm going to be a singer. So, I'm going to take singing lessons . Next year, I'm going to learn to play the piano. Julie is going to be a soccer ball player. So,she is going to play soccer every day. Next year, she's going to teach other students to play. Ken is going to be a computer programmer. So, he's going to try his best to learn math. Next year, he's going to ask teachers for help. 22. 根據(jù)中文提示寫(xiě)一60字以上的E_mail。(開(kāi)頭已給出)提示：Tom邀請(qǐng)LiPing參加他生日的聚會(huì)，但是LiPing的父母出差(be out on business)要到下個(gè)月才回來(lái)(come back home)，奶奶又生病在床，需要人照顧，而且他得為了即將到來(lái)的英語(yǔ)考試而學(xué)習(xí)。因此無(wú)法來(lái)參加這一生日聚會(huì)。他感到很抱歉。
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.I’d love to,but I can’t. My parents are both out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. I am very sorry,but I can’t go to your party. Thank you for asking me.I hope you will have a good time.
