A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.

一顆璀璨的明星

一個好老師對他的學生來說就像一顆閃亮的明星。李老師，我高中時的英語老師，就是我生命中一顆閃亮的新星。

當我開始上高中的時候，我英語學習有困難。因為我可憐的發(fā)音和語調我不敢在公開場合開口大聲說英語。我拿不到高分，我的語法是不正確的。沮喪和害怕被人嘲笑，我從來沒有舉手在英語課堂回答提問。李老師發(fā)現我的情況后，她鼓勵我，幫助我。她耐心地教我英語語法，幫助我了解如何寫好句子，還借給我許多英語書和雜志，迅速提高了我的英語。在她的幫助下，我漸漸對英語感興趣，并終得到了很高的分數。

李老師，就像一顆閃亮的星照耀著我前進的道路。