根據(jù)提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，要求條理清楚，文理通順，意思連貫。
近年來，傳染性疾病不斷發(fā)生，威脅人類的健康。為了使自己少受疾病的危害，日常生活中我們應(yīng)該怎么辦?應(yīng)注意哪些問題?請(qǐng)你就這一問題，給《學(xué)生英文報(bào)》寫一篇80詞左右的征文，談?wù)勛约旱南敕�。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.疾病對(duì)人們生活的影響;
2.在家、在學(xué)校等公共場所應(yīng)該注意哪些問題;
3.日常生活中應(yīng)該如何養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和衛(wèi)生習(xí)慣。
參考詞匯：infectious disease 傳染性疾病 infect 傳染
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In recent years, there are many infectious diseases that spread in the world. They are threatening the health of humankind. These diseases bring about a lot of troubles in our daily lives. Above all, they make people live in the fear.
However, we can do something to prevent infectious diseases. we shoul davoid of sharing personal things with others, when we are at home or in the public like schools.Besides, we should form a good living habit, In other words, we should live regularly and keep doing exercises. And we should wash our hands frequently and take a bath every day.
權(quán)威解讀
文章表達(dá)清晰明了，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語句通順，能夠運(yùn)用定語從句that spread...和whichmeans...連貫地表達(dá)出作者的意圖。however，besides很好地承接了上下文，使文章層次清楚，段落之間銜接自然。此外，小作者書寫自如，初中生能寫出如此好的英文實(shí)在難能可貴，為文章增色不少。
好詞佳句
1.threaten 威脅
2.bring about 帶來
3.live in the fear 生活在恐懼中4.in other words 換句話說
5.And we also need to keep personal hygiene, which means that we should
wash our hands frequently and take a bath every day. 而且我們應(yīng)該保持個(gè)人衛(wèi)生習(xí)慣，也就是說我們應(yīng)該經(jīng)常洗手，天天洗澡。
點(diǎn)撥：準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限性定語從句，以一個(gè)很出彩的句子給整篇文章畫上了圓滿的句號(hào)。
6.However, we can do something to prevent infectious diseases. 然而，我們可以做一些事情來預(yù)防傳染性疾病。
點(diǎn)撥：However把話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，為下文的展開做了鋪墊。
