托福寫作難點話題一覽
Live life in a hurry or at a slower pace?
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other
people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you
prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
寫作思路展開結構分析
兩個態(tài)度都片面。所以不要急于選擇。我們真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full
composure),卻很有效率(efficient)。所以,小編更傾向于careful planning。[51],因為careful
planning是成功的關鍵。另外,也要看是什么樣的事情,工作、學習,都喜歡盡快結束(give it an end as quickly as
possible),但是與朋友消遣,與家人相伴,卻不應該匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而應該at a slower pace。
本話題高分范文賞析
I used to live at a frantic pace. My wristwatch dictated my life, and the
hands of the clock pushed me forward to my next appointment, my next assignment,
and my next social engagement. However, I have managed to relax.
Now that I live my life at a slower pace I have become a better student, a
more reliable friend, and a person who enjoys life much more than before. Living
life at a slower pace has allowed me to pay much more attention to detail and to
work through my assignments at school more thoroughly. Before I was always
rushing through my reading and my writing, and my concentration was not very
strong. The clubs and sports teams I belonged to demanded a lot of attention.
After I decided to get rid of some of the more involved activities I had more
time to focus on my studies and the results have shown in my marks.
While I am still busy with school and extra curricular activities, I also
make a point of slowing down and taking a step back in order to prioritize the
things in my life. This allows me to evaluate how much time I should spend on
one thing or another. For example, while I was hurrying through my schedule I
often lost track of my friends. I forgot about dates that we made and things
that I agreed to do for them. This will not happen now. By slowing down the
tempo and realizing how important my pals are to me, I have once again become a
reliable friend.
Lastly, living life at a slower pace allows me to appreciate the good
things in my life. In the past I would only think about the things I would have
to get accomplished next. This anticipation did not allow me to concentrate on
the moment, but now I am able to enjoy a family dinner or an afternoon at the
movies with my friends without worrying about what I am supposed to do next.