范文
Directions: Someone put forward a proposal to adopt the “punchin” system in her memo in June 12, 2006. Write a memo to her with the information below. Your memo should be in no less than 100 words.
To: Mr. Brown manager of operations
From: Betty Green Supervisor
Subject: comments on the "punchin" system
Date: September 21
This is further to your memo dated back to June 12, 2006, in which you proposed that the employees adopt the “punchin” system.
I fully agree with you that we should take measures to increase the productivity and that we would a tighter control over the employees if the “punchin” system is adopted. However, honestly speaking, I dont think that adopting a tighter system will increase productivity. The most effective way to increase productivity, in my opinion, is to give the employees more incentives to work. I think we could further discuss other possibility of achieving this goal.
Your consideration of this suggestion would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Betty Green
譯文
這是回復(fù)你2006年6月12日的備忘錄，當(dāng)時(shí)你建議所有的員工采用打卡考勤制度。
我非常同意你的看法，我們應(yīng)該采取措施提供工作效率，如果采用打卡考勤制度我們可以更嚴(yán)格的控制員工。但說(shuō)實(shí)話，我并不認(rèn)為實(shí)行打卡制度就可以提高工作效率。我認(rèn)為，提高工作效率的辦法就是給員工更多的鼓勵(lì)。對(duì)于實(shí)現(xiàn)這一目的的方式我們還可以繼續(xù)探討。
希望你能認(rèn)真考慮這個(gè)建議。
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