2011年7月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)AI(至7.12)
1.
V1： issue是 constant innovation and change 能為企業(yè)帶來improvement的同時(shí)也會(huì)帶來一樣damage
用的 as as 結(jié)構(gòu) 具體不記得了 improvement在后面一個(gè)as后的 就一句話
自己也就分improve和damage兩個(gè)方面寫應(yīng)該也還好完成吧
感謝chenr523
V2：.AI: the constant innovation and change within an organization is as likely
to damage the organization as to improve it.
感謝jerryzx
題庫原題：Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to
damage the organization as they are to improve to it.
感謝racy616
考古：
V1Innovation and changes are as likely do damage to an organization as do good
to it. 大意就是創(chuàng)新和變化能夠給一個(gè)組織帶來的不良影響并不比好的影響少。
V2Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage
the organization as they are to improve it.
3.Issue是
No.87“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”87. “當(dāng)某項(xiàng)特定服務(wù)的技術(shù)和需求改變時(shí)，很多工人將失業(yè)。適應(yīng)這種改變的責(zé)任屬于每個(gè)工人而不是政府或企業(yè)�！�
非常感謝luckyxmx 提供這么好的原始材料~~~：）
提供觀點(diǎn)：
觀點(diǎn)： 工人自己要負(fù)責(zé) (程序猿的例子); 政府也要負(fù)責(zé)(中國代工工廠的例子)； 商業(yè)機(jī)構(gòu)也要負(fù)責(zé)(relocate+training to retool the employee)
1、The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
2、The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
3、Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.
5. AI financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.
題庫原題：31. “Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.”
提供觀點(diǎn)：
1. 把收入作為選擇職業(yè)的首要考慮因素會(huì)使人忽視了生命中更應(yīng)該追求的其他東西。事實(shí)上有許多人為了追求更為重要的目標(biāo)而放棄了使自己獲得收入的職業(yè)。象是特蕾莎修女，她以助人為快樂。盡管在物質(zhì)上是清貧的但是卻在別人快樂的同時(shí)自己也得到了幸福的回報(bào)。Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India. Although she was not rich all through her life, she was happier than most of her contemporaries because she gained happiness when she helped the poor. bliss blessedness 還有一些人為了做全職家長(zhǎng)更好的照顧孩子更是完全犧牲了得到錢的職業(yè)。在他們看來和家人在一起生活照顧他們的起居飲食是自己最開心的事情。
2. 誠然經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)是一切其他活動(dòng)的前提，但追求錢以外更重要的目標(biāo)并不一定意味著就會(huì)得不到物質(zhì)回報(bào)或者是一定會(huì)過得潦倒。事實(shí)上兩者是可以相互促進(jìn)的。一個(gè)追求智力上或者是創(chuàng)造力上的成就的人象是作家藝術(shù)家或者是音樂家當(dāng)他們的作品問世時(shí)候他們同時(shí)也得到了物質(zhì)的回報(bào)。others choose to pursue intellectual or creative fulfillment-as writers, artists, or musicians. 而這些錢反過來又會(huì)為他們的創(chuàng)作提供更好的條件和環(huán)境.
6. AI：increasing emphasis on global economy and cooperation, people need to understand their role as citizens of world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.
題庫原題：40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
提供觀點(diǎn)：
1. 兩者并不是完全對(duì)立的環(huán)保
2. 事實(shí)上兩者可以相互促進(jìn)一個(gè)人在一個(gè)國家做慈善工作很可能也會(huì)有一天為別的國家的人服務(wù)
3. 當(dāng)兩者沖突的時(shí)候哪個(gè)更重要取決與不同的情況。
1.
V1： issue是 constant innovation and change 能為企業(yè)帶來improvement的同時(shí)也會(huì)帶來一樣damage
用的 as as 結(jié)構(gòu) 具體不記得了 improvement在后面一個(gè)as后的 就一句話
自己也就分improve和damage兩個(gè)方面寫應(yīng)該也還好完成吧
感謝chenr523
V2：.AI: the constant innovation and change within an organization is as likely
to damage the organization as to improve it.
感謝jerryzx
題庫原題：Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to
damage the organization as they are to improve to it.
感謝racy616
考古：
V1Innovation and changes are as likely do damage to an organization as do good
to it. 大意就是創(chuàng)新和變化能夠給一個(gè)組織帶來的不良影響并不比好的影響少。
V2Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage
the organization as they are to improve it.
3.Issue是
No.87“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”87. “當(dāng)某項(xiàng)特定服務(wù)的技術(shù)和需求改變時(shí)，很多工人將失業(yè)。適應(yīng)這種改變的責(zé)任屬于每個(gè)工人而不是政府或企業(yè)�！�
非常感謝luckyxmx 提供這么好的原始材料~~~：）
提供觀點(diǎn)：
觀點(diǎn)： 工人自己要負(fù)責(zé) (程序猿的例子); 政府也要負(fù)責(zé)(中國代工工廠的例子)； 商業(yè)機(jī)構(gòu)也要負(fù)責(zé)(relocate+training to retool the employee)
1、The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
2、The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
3、Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.
5. AI financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.
題庫原題：31. “Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.”
提供觀點(diǎn)：
1. 把收入作為選擇職業(yè)的首要考慮因素會(huì)使人忽視了生命中更應(yīng)該追求的其他東西。事實(shí)上有許多人為了追求更為重要的目標(biāo)而放棄了使自己獲得收入的職業(yè)。象是特蕾莎修女，她以助人為快樂。盡管在物質(zhì)上是清貧的但是卻在別人快樂的同時(shí)自己也得到了幸福的回報(bào)。Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India. Although she was not rich all through her life, she was happier than most of her contemporaries because she gained happiness when she helped the poor. bliss blessedness 還有一些人為了做全職家長(zhǎng)更好的照顧孩子更是完全犧牲了得到錢的職業(yè)。在他們看來和家人在一起生活照顧他們的起居飲食是自己最開心的事情。
2. 誠然經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)是一切其他活動(dòng)的前提，但追求錢以外更重要的目標(biāo)并不一定意味著就會(huì)得不到物質(zhì)回報(bào)或者是一定會(huì)過得潦倒。事實(shí)上兩者是可以相互促進(jìn)的。一個(gè)追求智力上或者是創(chuàng)造力上的成就的人象是作家藝術(shù)家或者是音樂家當(dāng)他們的作品問世時(shí)候他們同時(shí)也得到了物質(zhì)的回報(bào)。others choose to pursue intellectual or creative fulfillment-as writers, artists, or musicians. 而這些錢反過來又會(huì)為他們的創(chuàng)作提供更好的條件和環(huán)境.
6. AI：increasing emphasis on global economy and cooperation, people need to understand their role as citizens of world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.
題庫原題：40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
提供觀點(diǎn)：
1. 兩者并不是完全對(duì)立的環(huán)保
2. 事實(shí)上兩者可以相互促進(jìn)一個(gè)人在一個(gè)國家做慈善工作很可能也會(huì)有一天為別的國家的人服務(wù)
3. 當(dāng)兩者沖突的時(shí)候哪個(gè)更重要取決與不同的情況。
