2007年湖南懷化市中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文范文
初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場(chǎng)，回想自己在父母和師長(zhǎng)的關(guān)愛和幫助下的成長(zhǎng)過程，心中充滿感戴之情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語(yǔ)給父母或老師寫一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意。

感謝對(duì)象：Father Mother Miss Gao

參考用語(yǔ)：take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…，thankful, work hard, try to do better…

注意：1. 感謝對(duì)象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請(qǐng)避用真實(shí)姓名和校名。

2. 除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受。

3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

Dear _______________,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

2007年湖南懷化市中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文范文
Dear Miss Gao,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours

Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng)：作者巧妙地把所有的提示詞融入到文章中，完整得敘述了對(duì)老師的感激之情以及感激老師的理由。本文銜接自然流暢，前后連貫，層層推進(jìn)。本文的特點(diǎn)是作者使用了很多復(fù)合句， 狀語(yǔ)從句，可見作者對(duì)初中階段的句型掌握地還是很扎實(shí)的。